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Strict Standards: Non-static method MagicWord::get() should not be called statically, assuming $this from incompatible context in /homepages/41/d451402188/htdocs/Tarang/includes/Parser.php on line 2152

Strict Standards: Non-static method MagicWord::get() should not be called statically, assuming $this from incompatible context in /homepages/41/d451402188/htdocs/Tarang/includes/Parser.php on line 2152

Strict Standards: Non-static method MagicWord::get() should not be called statically, assuming $this from incompatible context in /homepages/41/d451402188/htdocs/Tarang/includes/Parser.php on line 2152

Strict Standards: Non-static method MagicWord::get() should not be called statically, assuming $this from incompatible context in /homepages/41/d451402188/htdocs/Tarang/includes/Parser.php on line 2152

Strict Standards: Non-static method MagicWord::get() should not be called statically, assuming $this from incompatible context in /homepages/41/d451402188/htdocs/Tarang/includes/Parser.php on line 2152

Strict Standards: Non-static method MagicWord::get() should not be called statically, assuming $this from incompatible context in /homepages/41/d451402188/htdocs/Tarang/includes/Parser.php on line 2152

Strict Standards: Non-static method MagicWord::get() should not be called statically, assuming $this from incompatible context in /homepages/41/d451402188/htdocs/Tarang/includes/Parser.php on line 2152

Strict Standards: Non-static method MagicWord::get() should not be called statically, assuming $this from incompatible context in /homepages/41/d451402188/htdocs/Tarang/includes/Parser.php on line 2152

Strict Standards: Non-static method MagicWord::get() should not be called statically, assuming $this from incompatible context in /homepages/41/d451402188/htdocs/Tarang/includes/Parser.php on line 2152

Strict Standards: Non-static method MagicWord::get() should not be called statically, assuming $this from incompatible context in /homepages/41/d451402188/htdocs/Tarang/includes/Parser.php on line 2152

Strict Standards: Non-static method MagicWord::get() should not be called statically, assuming $this from incompatible context in /homepages/41/d451402188/htdocs/Tarang/includes/Parser.php on line 2152

Strict Standards: Non-static method MagicWord::get() should not be called statically, assuming $this from incompatible context in /homepages/41/d451402188/htdocs/Tarang/includes/Parser.php on line 2152

Strict Standards: Non-static method MagicWord::get() should not be called statically, assuming $this from incompatible context in /homepages/41/d451402188/htdocs/Tarang/includes/Parser.php on line 2152

Strict Standards: Non-static method MagicWord::get() should not be called statically, assuming $this from incompatible context in /homepages/41/d451402188/htdocs/Tarang/includes/Parser.php on line 2152

Strict Standards: Non-static method MagicWord::get() should not be called statically, assuming $this from incompatible context in /homepages/41/d451402188/htdocs/Tarang/includes/Parser.php on line 2152

Strict Standards: Non-static method MagicWord::get() should not be called statically, assuming $this from incompatible context in /homepages/41/d451402188/htdocs/Tarang/includes/Parser.php on line 2152

Strict Standards: Non-static method MagicWord::get() should not be called statically, assuming $this from incompatible context in /homepages/41/d451402188/htdocs/Tarang/includes/Parser.php on line 2152

Strict Standards: Non-static method MagicWord::get() should not be called statically, assuming $this from incompatible context in /homepages/41/d451402188/htdocs/Tarang/includes/Parser.php on line 2152

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Vishal has already pointed out the positive aspects and the deficiencies in your other song. My comments are somewhat similar for this song too. Vishal has already pointed out the positive aspects and the deficiencies in your other song. My comments are somewhat similar for this song too.
-* Numerous off-notes. You are having difficulty singing the words "Hamein", "Hain"+* Numerous off-notes. You are having difficulty singing the words '''Hamein''', '''Hain'''
-* Trailing part of "Hamein" in "Lati Hain Hamein", "Nazar Aati Hain Hamein" is off.+* Trailing part of "Hamein" in '''Lati Hain Hamein''', '''Nazar Aati Hain Hamein''' is off.
-* Trailing part of "Hain" in "Mehek Uthti Hain" is besur.+* Trailing part of '''Hain''' in '''Mehek Uthti Hain''' is besur.
-* "Phoolon Se" is off-tune+* '''Phoolon Se''' is off-tune
* Voice is shaky in '''Rahein'''. The problem is recurring on all long sustained notes. * Voice is shaky in '''Rahein'''. The problem is recurring on all long sustained notes.
* '''Bulaati''' sounds like '''Bhoolati''' * '''Bulaati''' sounds like '''Bhoolati'''
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Harshal Harshal
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 +Harshal:
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 +Thanks for listening and for commenting. Thanks also for reminding me that attention to basics is very important. Yes, there is no quick fix and I need to pay more attention to my Swargram lessons than I have been doing in the last few months!
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 +Harish.
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Harish,

Vishal has already pointed out the positive aspects and the deficiencies in your other song. My comments are somewhat similar for this song too.

  • Numerous off-notes. You are having difficulty singing the words Hamein, Hain
  • Trailing part of "Hamein" in Lati Hain Hamein, Nazar Aati Hain Hamein is off.
  • Trailing part of Hain in Mehek Uthti Hain is besur.
  • Phoolon Se is off-tune
  • Voice is shaky in Rahein. The problem is recurring on all long sustained notes.
  • Bulaati sounds like Bhoolati
  • Kabhi in Yaad Teri Kabhi sounds more like Kabi
  • Yaad Teri Kabhi is off-tune
  • Das-tak has 2 notes: Dha-Pa. You have used Pa-Pa
  • Chaand Se is off-tune

You can improve singing with a reference instrument such as harmonium or violin. You need to refine singing singular notes and note transitions. Sing alaaps. I would like to hear you sing a Swaramaalika in Raag Yaman, Bhoop, Des or Jhinjhoti. You can get these on the Sample Tracks section of TKP. Let us start working from the basics :)

Harshal


Harshal:

Thanks for listening and for commenting. Thanks also for reminding me that attention to basics is very important. Yes, there is no quick fix and I need to pay more attention to my Swargram lessons than I have been doing in the last few months!

Harish.


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