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Feedback for Vishal


Vishal,

Good One! Is the track like this? It had lot of disturbance in between and your voice had lots of pops and bass. No doubt about your singing since we all know that you sing so well.

Thanks,

Parag


Hi Vishal:

As you can guess, I have listened to this Talat Aziz original ghazal umpteen times and I can now attempt to give you some meaningful feedback to your attempt. My overall evaluation is: VERY GOOD. But since you are a Taranaa Star, my expectations of you are very high. Here are a few of my obseravtions for your improvement in round 2:

1. Ye zami CHAND se; lots of modulation on the CHAND. (I am also guilty on this!!) 2. Nazar aati hai hame; Aziz does not take a pause after "aati." 3. Surak PHOOLON se; you know what I mean (not "foolon"); both times. 4....mahek uththi HAIN; it is "hain" both times. 5. Bhulati hai hame: same as #2 above; continuous singing without pause sounds nicer. 6. Yaad teri KABHI...; 2nd time around, "kabhi" seems a bit off. 7. Ab to kar waqt, YAHI baat..; same as #1 above; lots of modulation on "yahi." You have done very well with the modulation on the other key words: TERI, AAWAAZ, PEHER, KYU.

These observations are as I see them. Please feel free to disagree. Also, you must have noticed that the track is slower than the original. 4'55" instead of 4'30". I have a different mood of expression when I sing with Aziz and then with the track. In Round 2, I will attempt to make suitable adjustments to the track using SoundForge.

Best wishes. Keep singing.

Harish.

PS: I look forward to your evaluation of my attempt with this ghazal. Please pin point where I can improve in Round 2. Thanks.


Vishal:

you have captured the mood of the ghazal. If we leave the diction apart, i felt as if you are restraining your voice to give modulations. It would have been even better with a little "open mouth"..try it once, it brings the voice out from the belly...otherwise everything right on spot...you are one of the best singers on taranaa.

Raj.


Thanks for the feedback guys ! ...:-)

Parag..The recording didn't come out good this time :-( ..Tried removing the noise and it was messing up the voice ...Yeah could hear lot of pops here and there ...even "Bulati" sometimes sounds "Bhulati" because of those pops. May be I was singing too close to the mic..Will try to better this next time ..:-)

Harish, I tried my best with modulations ..ofcourse I am not Talat Aziz ;-) ...The modulations on CHAND are bit tricky ..I tried it but it was sounding worse so went ahead with something which was ok ;-) ..mah bad :-| ...Looks like even I did the same mistake with Phoolon se ..errr... I think I was trying a bit different modulation on "Kabhi" the second time ..I should have sticked with the original ...If it sounded off note then would surely change it ...I didnt know the track was slow ..please send me the modified track when you are done ...will take a shot at it ..might be tough since I already practiced on this one ..lets see ..;-) ..

Raj, Will keep your suggestions in mind ..:-)..Thnx for listening ..

Thanks, -Vishal



Vishal,

Enjoyed your song very much ... full of romance and expression!!! You have a rich voice, deep bass, good range. Sur-taal is 100%. You have a very good ear for catching even the finest of modulations. I liked the way you sang "Hain Hamein" very much.

Here is what I would like to see in your next recording:

  • Do not post process your rich voice with noise cancellation or compressors. Instead keep the recording levels well below saturation
  • Do not sing too close to the mic. Avoid those pops in "ph", "bh"
  • Do not mumble the words while singing softly. I am referring to the mukhada, where "zameen" sounds like "zamen". Open your mouth
  • Try to add more modulations without restraining yourself.
  • Try singing "Behtar" in Chaand Se Behtar after a slight delay, instead of singing on the beat.


Harshal


I totally agree with Harshal's observations. You have a really wonderful voice and you need very minimal post-processing. In this rendition:

  • Too much echo and voice is slightly louder (I suggest bringing the volume level down by at least 20-25%).
  • "kee", "Zameen", "Bulatee" ... all these ee's should be accented strongly. As Harshal also mentioned these sound more with single e's than double e's.
  • While most of the ghazal has very natual and soft modulations, you sound slightly tense with some modulations. Try to relax while singing those.
  • For post-processing, do this in the order: save raw file, remove noise, compress, adjust volume level, add reverb, adjust volume, save file as a new version.

I hope it helps.

Azam


Harshal and Azam,

Thanks for taking your time to listen to my rendition and providing such a valuable feedback :-) I will try my best to re-record the song with these points in mind.

-Vishal


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